Discalced Carmelite Friars

Province of St. Therese

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This poem is a response to the pervasive and wanton distractions that overrun our age; to which Christians are not entirely immune.   Our Carmelite vocation stands as a remedy to these distressing symptoms of Modernity; and humanity’s deepest longing for spiritual wholeness.


Woven into the summer’s heat 
a drowsy instance snaps, a 
crack of thunder – jarring –
revealing the surface of her soul, 
gaping there – a tiny hole.

Lethargy wraps and winds around
the tip of an indexed finger 
reaching for the microscopic rift.  

Irreverent to her consent, it lifts 
hovers and spins, like cotton-candy 
floss, unraveling into an uncharted
cosmos, abruptly exploding the 
confines of a repressed universe.

Woefully lacking in equal measure
both compass and direction, 
ceases her probe, just as 
an angry wall-cloud passes.

– full length of days 
from Sunday to Sunday –  
she attends to her phone.
Wild bouts of slides, swipes and glides, 
bring forth a restive stream; one
flurried scene after scene. 

Its glassy void informs her palm, filling
space and devotion - hour after hour,
blotting at her vision of a vortexing fissure;
a blackness once into which she peered
– at a glance – the tornadic churning
of disconsolate cheer.

Within an errant breeze rests 
a still, small – mighty voice.
Our Loving Lord’s intent –  
stalwart in calling – hushes 
and whispers in veiled resident 
silence, patient to be heard.

Arms spread wide in affection
offering one discourse only;
fashioned upon His finely
sculpted breast.   At the center
– Creation's canvas –
fixed inside His heart 
where every tear, every care, 
every sin can be placed.

Washed– remedied – once and for all
by a shower of grace.  Needing no cloud
to form or scatter like rain.
Not fleeting nor dismissive
like a careless summer storm.

All she needs do, is put down 
the phone, turn out all sound,
arrest all her longings…
…let the earth quake, 
the wind howl,
lightning flash 
and thunder growl

Mercy will detain her ear 
as it drips and trails into
the cosmic breach, 
born of a one-sided life.

A Reflection: …sanctify Christ as Lord in your hearts…for we should always be ready to share the hope we have within us...  1 Peter 3:15 

St Peter’s epistle deals with challenges early Christians faced.  One commentary puts it this way “The problem addressed would not be official persecution but the difficulty of living the Christian life in a hostile, secular environment that espoused different values and subjected the Christian minority to ridicule and oppression.” A relevant comparison to the 21st century.

Written by Hannah de Lisser
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